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14 September 2021
WALT: Follow the sequence of Narrative writing
Title Asura wrath
It was a scorching day and there was war between Asura and the seven deities. They were the most powerful Kaijus in the world. Their names are mantra heis big robot that is as big as the moon and blue skin, because he used to be on our Asuras' side but he was undercover ,and a golden crab he is the strongest titan in the whole universe and he could get 50v50 chance that he can beat Asura wrath and now. Asura wrath he is strong and he can turn into anything like mithra’s power, destructor, and all out attack, that is his special ability and when he goes berserker mode and then he tried to defeat the matra but he didn’t.
A couple of months later the whole of universe obliterated and Asura wrath felt bad because destroyed he destroyed the mantra but Asura was still alive from that explosion from the mantra so then Asura had to find another home which place was called valorant he didn’t know what place was that there were other players from the game and they were fast as tiger and he Asura wrath said “What are these people?”
But then after war against those people it was a new chapter, last chance no rebirths so then after that we moved back home then we can play and have fun I hope we are all ok.
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