HK Narrative

 

• 21-9-21

WALT :Write a narrative that’s Amazing 

Couple of months ago there were 3 vertebrates named Pulse, he is a 

 Dragon  has a scar on his eye,  tattoos on his leg,  green eye colour., the skin is green and black, the boots are Nike Jordan's  on his shoes,  and he has Godzilla's scales on  his back, and glasses.   Cornflakes is a unicorn that has dark fire hair, light black skin  boots Adidas,eye colour white, and  tattoos. Then me i'm a  living soul I have white wings, eagle eye colour  white flame coming, a device on my wrist.,   

Lake Ngatu 

I was bored but I said  “Hey guys I’m Blase ” so he was thinking were going to do a party  and his friends and  Cornflakes  was thinking  he said “Oh wait we should go to lake Ngatu  so then we can have some laughter or even have  a party” yeah but when they were thinking they were like hmmm should we because  it could people well I  I am person  well they thinking I felt like They weren’t not   going to the party because I'm going to invite my friends. But they said  .‘YES’ and I was excited to get a party going and we did celebration and some 

 

They were exhausted  and I was really turned off from that fun day at the beach together but when the pulse told where Cornflakes that reminded me he was at  they forgot about cornflakes. Because  he said that he was going to do his last cannonball  at lake  Ngatu so we scrambled all the way. Then  we told him and that we head back  home.

Self Assessment:

Today I improved my writing by: 

• Staying on task 

• Describe 

• I wrote 

To improve I need to:

• Make my writing more juicer 

• Do better brain storm