II am a Year 5 student at Paparore School School in Northland, New Zealand. Mrs Junjovich is my teacher. My blog is a collection of my work at various stages, across different curriculum areas. Throughout my time at Paparore School I may share draft copies of my work for feedback and feed forward. Other times I will share my final published pieces. I would appreciate any feedback through leaving me a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment. Thank you
WALT retell a story using picture prompts to help. Reflection - What did I do well? - so what did I do well is that I didn't know how to do screenshot. What did I find tricky?- so what I did tricky is that I didn't make some writing not make sense.
Hemi, you have created a colourful google slide deck and re-told the story of Puss in Boots. Next time you need to make sure you add more details to your story as it doesn't make sense. You needed to explain about how Puss tricked the giant and the king.
Hemi, you have created a colourful google slide deck and re-told the story of Puss in Boots. Next time you need to make sure you add more details to your story as it doesn't make sense. You needed to explain about how Puss tricked the giant and the king.
ReplyDeleteHemi the slid is amazing and some of the sentences don't make seance. But the rest is awesome. What happend to puss in bots?
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