II am a Year 5 student at Paparore School School in Northland, New Zealand. Mrs Junjovich is my teacher. My blog is a collection of my work at various stages, across different curriculum areas. Throughout my time at Paparore School I may share draft copies of my work for feedback and feed forward. Other times I will share my final published pieces. I would appreciate any feedback through leaving me a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment. Thank you
Friday, March 20, 2020
Wednesday, March 18, 2020
Kawa of Care assembly - Draft Writing
WALT understand kawa of care and WALT write a recount our assembly experience.
Check out my draft writing ...
Last Friday it was Te Manga's assembly.We were getting ready to do our assembly. We were in eight groups. we were so it was Reo, Cooper and I. The burglars were Kaiora, Hori and Millan. But we then we started to do our trolly dance. After our part, we then lined up along the wall. The song started and so we walked to our spots. Once the song
Tuva-Lisa went to say her part, next came Atama and then Alani. My part was to say, “make sure you put your chromebook on a sensible surface.” At the end of the assembly, Tuva-Lisa remembers to say, “just follow the KAWA OF CARE.” After that kaiora says, “sir can you hand out the certificates please.”
Tuva-Lisa went to say her part, next came Atama and then Alani. My part was to say, “make sure you put your chromebook on a sensible surface.” At the end of the assembly, Tuva-Lisa remembers to say, “just follow the KAWA OF CARE.” After that kaiora says, “sir can you hand out the certificates please.”
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